帮忙修改一下假设你是Jeff,请根据下面提供的信息,给你的美国笔友Tom写一封信,要求利用所给信息,字数不少于50词.1

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假设你是jeff,请根据下面提供的信息,给你的美国笔友tom写一封信,要求利用所给信息,字数不少于50词.
1.家住临沂,临沂是一座美丽的城市,在夏天天气炎热,在冬天天气寒冷
2.爸爸是医生,妈妈是教师,他们都很喜欢他们的工作.你想成为***,因为那是令人激动的工作
3.现在是6点钟,爸爸在读书,妈妈在做饭,你在写信.
deartom,
i'm living linyi. linyi is a very beautiful city. in summer,here si hot. and in winter, here is cold. about my family.my father is a doctor. my mother si a teacher. they all like their works. about me? i want to be a policeman. because it's exciting.
now, it's 6 o'clock. my father is reading a book, my mother si cooking. i'm writing the letter. how about you ?please write and tell me! thanks!
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该名网友总共回答了16个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：87.5%

I'm living Linyi. ——I live in Linyi.描述一个客观现实用一般现在时就行了
In summer,here si hot. And in winter, here is cold.
——It's hot in summer and cold in winter.
About my family.——这句可以不要
My father is a doctor. My mother si a teacher. They all like their works. ——work.
About me?——What about me
I want to be a policeman. Because it's exciting.
Now, it's 6 o'clock. My father is reading a book, my mother si cooking. I'm writing the letter. How about you ?Please write and tell me! Thanks! ——write to me. 写信给某人
写的时候要注意,里边几个is都写成了si,考试不小心会被扣分的

1年前他留下的回答

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