求大神检查作文的正确性！！！！！急

求大神检查作文的正确性！！！！！急
Objective to succeed
Everyone has a goal, it can prove that you have the ideal, if you can strive for the ideal, and persevere, you will eventually succeed, and reach the other side of the ideal.
The goal or big or small, and I as a high school student, in my opinion, to get good grades is my goal in the exam, enter the ideal university is also my goal, I want to fight for the realization of the goal.
At the beginning of senior high school, I was at a loss, I didn't know how tothrough high school life, so in the first exam, I got the bottom of the class of fourth, I was very sad, but after consideration, it let me know, I should have my own goals, and strive for the goal. So I studied hard in the second month, andlucky to become the "star of progress". Through this test for the two time, I understand the importance of the goals ， in the next learning life, I will continue to set goals, and constantly realize their.
The goal can't just be saying, you're going to implement, to use your own actionsto achieve the goal, this is what we should do, perhaps in the process we will experience many hardships. But we can not give up or stop, we should go on to achieve the goal with our own sweat and effort. When you sweat and effort toachieve the goal, and successfully realizes it, you will taste the joy of success, itwill inspire you to march forward courageously in the future of life on the road!
Come on! Let us together for the goal!
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Everyone has a goal, it can prove that you have the ideal, if you can strive for the ideal, and persevere, you will eventually succeed, and reach the other side of the ideal.
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