帮我修改下这篇作文My favorite movie is a comedy film,he is very fun a

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My favorite movie is a comedy film,he is very fun and funny,as well as inside the clown is very funny,my favorite comedian is Zhao Benshan,and he played a very good comedy.
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persevere_gh 网友

该名网友总共回答了21个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：95.2%

1.he is very fun and funny改成：IT IS VERY.（电影不是人,要用IT）
2.as well as inside the clown is very funny改成：THE CLOWN INSIDE IS VERY FUNNY（AS WELL AS用法错误）
3.and he played a very good comedy.改为.A VERY GOOD COMEDIAN（演的是喜剧角色,而不是戏剧本身）

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吴小大 网友

该名网友总共回答了1个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

My favourtie movies are comedy films,its very funny and fun, as well as inside the clown is funny too. Zhao Benshan is my favourite comedian,he played a very good comedy.

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转朱阁03 网友

该名网友总共回答了15个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：80%

My favorite movie is a comedy film, he is very fun and funny, as well as inside the clown is very funny, my favorite comedian is Zhao Benshan, and he played a very good comedy when do you do ? when?

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