导读：请各位帮我订正修改以下英语短文44 请各位帮我订正修改以下英语短文44When I grow up I want to be a dancer Everyone have a dream in their mind.Whoever he or she is,they will try to make their dreams come ture.I also have...
请各位帮我订正修改以下英语短文44
请各位帮我订正修改以下英语短文44
When I grow up I want to be a dancer
Everyone have a dream in their mind.Whoever he or she is,they will try to make their dreams come ture.I also have a wish:When I grow up I want to be a dancer.That's my dream.Because I like dancing very mush.And I like Yang LIping best.She is a famous dancer. I am going to be a dancer like her.I will do my best in learning more about dancing.And I will practice it ervey day.I believe I will do it.I hope my dream will come true one day!
请帮我指出错误并改正，如果改得好，我会追加高分。
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everyone have 改为has
very mush 改为much
I like Yang Liping best 改为 Yang Liping is my favorite dancer.
I believe I will do it 改为 I believe I will do well
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