求大神帮忙修改演讲稿,1.A book which affects me most

求大神帮忙修改演讲稿,1.A book which affects me most
正文：If you ask me which book has the greatest importance to me,I will answer you without hesitation:,for it is that I love and that affects me most.
Oliver Twist is an orphan.His mother dead as soon as she bears Oliver.Oliver grows up in the orphanage.He escapes to London because he can't stand the bully and oppress from the shop keeper of the coffin shop.
In London,he also have lots of bitter experience.He was trained as a thief.And because of this,he arrested by the police.Then he meet a kind old man who adopt him,but he fell into wong hands again.
At last,he escaped by the help from a kind thief,and luckly he meet his aunt and inherit his inheritance.
Charles Dickens said:Love makes the world go around.From Oliver Twist,I know even though you lived in a dark world.even though you missed your faith,therewas someone who hold love to you and make your faith back on again. intoash 1年前他留下的回答 已收到1个回答

歪歪ss球 网友

该名网友总共回答了9个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：100%

1.has the greatest importance建议修改成is most important
2.for it is that I love and that affects me most 建议修改成 for it's my love and affects me most 3.Oliver Twist is an orphan.His mother dead as soon as she bears Oliver.Oliver grows up in the orphanage.He escapes to London because he can't stand the bully and oppress from the shop keeper of the coffin shop.时态不对,讲的是过去还有过去完成..自己修改..
4.后面引用伟人的话,条理也算一般,逻辑不强,要是满分100.本屌丝只能给你65..好好学习,英语注意时态,条理.

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intoash

第一次自己写演讲稿，思维有些混乱……大神觉得讲稿需要简练一些么？故事介绍会不会太多？

歪歪ss球

这种短篇演讲稿在班上玩玩还行，这个故事已经很简练了，1.5分钟，控制好语速，没点问题

intoash

QAQ准备去参加比赛，大神不介意的话再改改呗，加悬赏哦亲~

歪歪ss球

哪的演讲比赛，有1.5分钟的麽，戳，演讲比赛不是看你稿子写得咋样，停顿，发音，语速还有很多都要注意的地方，要改直接找你英语老师改，学演讲推荐 疯狂英语 名人演讲 我那时候是磁带的....听听对听力，口语还有演讲都有提高，至于你悬不悬赏，那是你自己的事了，和本屌丝无关。

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